vrijdag 9 december 2011

eleven p.m.

The phone rings. Would I like to help him move out next Saturday evening at eleven p.m.? A bit overwhelmed by his question, I do not answer straight away but I recover quickly. Yes, of course I will be there. He sounds exhausted and his explanation is an emotional summary of facts. They broke up and he left. End of story.

I had known about the increasing conflicts in their relationship for some time, but I had certainly not expected this. He is determined to leave quickly and quietly and does not want nosy neighbors around, hence the time. I wonder if this would not cause the opposite effect, but I say nothing.



home alone—
the subtle scent of her perfume
in the bedroom



[in 2009 verschenen op Haibun Today]

4 opmerkingen:

  1. thank you, Karol.

    kind regards,
    Marleen

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  2. Mooie terughoudend beschreven haibun over een trieste gebeurtenis Marleen. Mooi passende haiku. Groetjes, Arnold

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  3. dank je wel voor je reactie, Arnold.

    groetjes, Marleen

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